After
reading the first few pages of Aura, I sensed something a little strange, yet I
couldn’t exactly put my finger on it. My first thought was that it must be the
2nd person narrative, which I found extremely annoying at first. But
as I continued reading, I realized it was beyond the unusual narration, it was
something fundamentally missing. Finally it hit me. Emotion. Nowhere in the
text was there anything that even hinted at the emotional feeling of a
character. It was left up to me, the reader, to add in this crucial aspect of
any story. After this realization, the book became much more exciting because I
was an active participant in the story, I could introduce any feeling I wished,
guide it in any emotional direction I wanted. The reader must take in the eerie
descriptions, dialogue, and odd physical actions to not only synthesize a fear
but also experience it. Although the narration is telling “you” exactly what is
happening, down to the most discrete details of taking off clothing or what is being
served for dinner, the lack of emotions bring a great freedom to much of the
novel.
Because
the emotions are largely absent, the anxiety, thrill, and suspense are not tied
up in the characters but rather in the mind of the reader. Felipe Montero is
nothing more than a vessel in which the reader uses to travel through the
emotions of the novel. He is the sum of his experiences, of the physical
actions that he performs. Montero never experiences the suspense of learning
that Aura and Consuelo are the same woman and he doesn’t feel the tension of
being trapped in the home. His actions
are indifferent, robotic to an almost disturbing level. The only emotion we get
from Montero is his love for Aura/Consuelo, yet even this comes from his physical
draw to her beauty rather than an emotional connection, leaving the reader to
fill in the emotional void. By the conclusion, the ending leaves the reader
feeling a bit tricked by their own minds. Although Montero performs the actions
that lead to his relationship with Consuelo, we brought him there emotionally. By the conclusion, I realized this "emotional freedom" I believed I had throughout the novel was nothing more than an illusion. The novel was strategically written to bring the readers to the same emotional conclusion.
I think the second-person narrative also helps in engendering the feelings of the reader because it specifically points at the reader as the main character in the story. About halfway through the book, I forgot that Felipe was one that things were happening too and became throughly involved in what happened to him, mostly because I felt like it was me. With the second-person giving all those details like you say above, it is almost as if it is telling you what to feel. I'm not sure if I ever believed I had emotional freedom, but I definitely got the same idea of being guided into the emotions of the book.
ReplyDeleteThe lack of emotion in this book totally caught me off guard, but in some aspects i kind of liked it. It allowed for the narrative to ring more true to the individual, and yes Fuentes did construct the novella to allow everyone to reach the same emotional conclusion, but I think it is the degree to which everyone experiences it that makes the work remarkable. The work allows for each reader to have different degrees of emotion that makes the novella, minus the crazy parts, more realistic.
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